My Mostly Clean Bedroom

 This week my my class was learning how to do a descriptive piece of writing. I enjoyed writing about my room because my room had just been renovated and this writing  was a easy way to help me to explain it to others.

 

My Mostly Clean bedroom

My favourite part of my bedroom is my two windows pointing in opposite directions, one pointing out to the road and the other out to the mountains. I love walking into my room in the afternoon because there is always a soft pink glow from the sunset.

I have two beds in my squarish bedroom on each side of my large window. Nextdoor is a field with vegetables and when they are ready to be picked or sprayed you can always hear the tractors cruising past.

In my room I have a white closet filled with books and old toys Next to my closet is a black four drawer dresser. When I'm bored I like to hide in my closet and play roblox, homescapes or watch tiktoks.

My sister loves the lighting in my room and she says I have to keep it clean for the guests because my room is at the end of the hall so everyone can see it. My dad thinks that my room is tidy but he dislikes it when I leave my clothes all over the floor. When I'm not at my dad's house I'm at my mum's house and my dad shuts my bedroom door so when he opens it when i'm not there a big cloud of warm air blows into his face. But I think it is clean.

 

I have two main smells in my room. One of the smells is my fresh coconut deodorant. And the other smell is the food I sneak into my room.

I love my room because it is mostly tidy. It has the best view of the sunset and it is perfect for me.

Thank you letter

 Zoe. S.

St Mary’s School

40 Campion Rd

Gisborne

Dear taylor

Thank you for letting us use your pools and also giving us green bands. It was so cool getting to relax in the lazy pool. Everyone had a great time and that is because of you.

One of my highlights was swimming all the way to the bottom of the deep pool and touching the bottom. It was really deep but that made it more challenging and fun.

So thank you so much for making room for us to have loads of fun, giving us green bands and letting us use you pools

Aroha nui korua 

Zoe Stone

Dogs Make Better Pets Than Cats

Have you ever wondered if dogs make better pets than cats? Well dogs are energetic, snuggly and are always fantastic friends to have making them better than cats.

Firstly they run around and are energetic, you can play with them outside they also give you exercise because they need walks to keep them fit. Dogs are like a cute, loving treadmill all in one.

Secondly dogs are super snuggly and are one of the most affectionate pets to have. They love to look after you when you are sick, sad, and even sometimes mad. There are lots of different types of dogs for the sick, blind, deaf and many more.

Lastly They are fantastic friends to everyone. Dogs love humans 

Well humans that aren't breaking into there house or attacking there human. They even love babies and are gentle with them making lots of parents love them.

In conclusion there is no question that dogs make better pets than cats this is because they are energetic, snuggly and are fantastic friends. 

Success Criteria:	Self Assessment😀😀😀😀
I have used my first technique to enhance my writing	😀😀
I have used my second technique to enhance my writing	😀😀😀
I have used my third technique to enhance my writing	😀
Use at least three different (FEARRR) persuasive techniques in your writing.

Active Reflection:	My Reflection
What have I done well?	I have used a lot of emotive language.
Next step:	I have to use more repetition.

           

Matariki breakfast

This morning I came to school with my meduim sized container full of delicious oranges and a little plastic container full of tasty biscuits as soon as we could we devoured the junk food soon there was only a few yum stuff left. We were full but when Miss Hickling started cleaning up me and Johnny ran to the oragnes and started to eat them soon there was one left I reached my and out and grabbed the last one Johnny sighed and walked away. I grabbed the lid from under my container and secured it on top of the container.

Meeting Macey

Today I was writing a recount about getting my puppy Macey. I enjoyed writing about Macey because I love her and it was a exciting time for me.       I found nothing difficult because it was a never forgetting experience for me.

Nau mai, haere mai

Nau mai, haere mai!

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