My Mostly Clean Bedroom

 This week my my class was learning how to do a descriptive piece of writing. I enjoyed writing about my room because my room had just been renovated and this writing  was a easy way to help me to explain it to others.

 

My Mostly Clean bedroom

My favourite part of my bedroom is my two windows pointing in opposite directions, one pointing out to the road and the other out to the mountains. I love walking into my room in the afternoon because there is always a soft pink glow from the sunset.

I have two beds in my squarish bedroom on each side of my large window. Nextdoor is a field with vegetables and when they are ready to be picked or sprayed you can always hear the tractors cruising past.

In my room I have a white closet filled with books and old toys Next to my closet is a black four drawer dresser. When I'm bored I like to hide in my closet and play roblox, homescapes or watch tiktoks.

My sister loves the lighting in my room and she says I have to keep it clean for the guests because my room is at the end of the hall so everyone can see it. My dad thinks that my room is tidy but he dislikes it when I leave my clothes all over the floor. When I'm not at my dad's house I'm at my mum's house and my dad shuts my bedroom door so when he opens it when i'm not there a big cloud of warm air blows into his face. But I think it is clean.

 

I have two main smells in my room. One of the smells is my fresh coconut deodorant. And the other smell is the food I sneak into my room.

I love my room because it is mostly tidy. It has the best view of the sunset and it is perfect for me.