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Chinese new year
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Monday, 9 November 2020
Thank you letter
Zoe. S.
St Mary’s School
40 Campion Rd
Gisborne
Dear taylor
Thank you for letting us use your pools and also giving us green bands. It was so cool getting to relax in the lazy pool. Everyone had a great time and that is because of you.
One of my highlights was swimming all the way to the bottom of the deep pool and touching the bottom. It was really deep but that made it more challenging and fun.
So thank you so much for making room for us to have loads of fun, giving us green bands and letting us use you pools
Aroha nui korua
Zoe Stone
Tuesday, 13 October 2020
Monday, 21 September 2020
Dogs Make Better Pets Than Cats
Firstly they run around and are energetic, you can play with them outside they also give you exercise because they need walks to keep them fit. Dogs are like a cute, loving treadmill all in one.
Secondly dogs are super snuggly and are one of the most affectionate pets to have. They love to look after you when you are sick, sad, and even sometimes mad. There are lots of different types of dogs for the sick, blind, deaf and many more.
Lastly They are fantastic friends to everyone. Dogs love humans
Well humans that aren't breaking into there house or attacking there human. They even love babies and are gentle with them making lots of parents love them.
In conclusion there is no question that dogs make better pets than cats this is because they are energetic, snuggly and are fantastic friends.
Success Criteria: | Self Assessment😀😀😀😀 |
I have used my first technique to enhance my writing | 😀😀 |
I have used my second technique to enhance my writing | 😀😀😀 |
I have used my third technique to enhance my writing | 😀 |
Use at least three different (FEARRR) persuasive techniques in your writing. |
Active Reflection: | My Reflection |
What have I done well? | I have used a lot of emotive language. |
Next step: | I have to use more repetition. |
