Monday, 9 November 2020

Thank you letter

 Zoe. S.

St Mary’s School

40 Campion Rd

Gisborne


Dear taylor


Thank you for letting us use your pools and also giving us green bands. It was so cool getting to relax in the lazy pool. Everyone had a great time and that is because of you.


One of my highlights was swimming all the way to the bottom of the deep pool and touching the bottom. It was really deep but that made it more challenging and fun.


So thank you so much for making room for us to have loads of fun, giving us green bands and letting us use you pools



Aroha nui korua 

Zoe Stone


Tuesday, 13 October 2020

Monday, 21 September 2020

Dogs Make Better Pets Than Cats

Have you ever wondered if dogs make better pets than cats? Well dogs are energetic, snuggly and are always fantastic friends to have making them better than cats.

Firstly they run around and are energetic, you can play with them outside they also give you exercise because they need walks to keep them fit. Dogs are like a cute, loving treadmill all in one.


Secondly dogs are super snuggly and are one of the most affectionate pets to have. They love to look after you when you are sick, sad, and even sometimes mad. There are lots of different types of dogs for the sick, blind, deaf and many more.


Lastly They are fantastic friends to everyone. Dogs love humans 

Well humans that aren't breaking into there house or attacking there human. They even love babies and are gentle with them making lots of parents love them.


In conclusion there is no question that dogs make better pets than cats this is because they are energetic, snuggly and are fantastic friends


Success Criteria:

Self Assessment😀😀😀😀

I have used my first technique to enhance my writing

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I have used my second technique to enhance my writing

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I have used my third technique to enhance my writing

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Use at least three different (FEARRR) persuasive techniques in your writing.



Active Reflection: 

My Reflection



What have I done well?



I have used a lot of emotive language.





Next step:



I have to use more repetition.


           

Friday, 31 July 2020

Faith poster


I was learning about making faith posters. I found it difficult to find the right words. I enjoyed making this faith poster because i got to choose the background. Next time I will change the background and write more words onto it.  

Cyclone bola book cover


 I was learning about making a book cover. I found it hard to find out who the author is. 

Saturday, 25 July 2020

Math pixel art


Yesterday we had to do math pixel art the red means it is wrong but it is just broken.  

Friday, 24 July 2020

Summarising The Jungle In My Garden

Today for reading we were reading a book called the jungle in my garden then we got sent off to summarise the book.