Monday, 21 September 2020

Dogs Make Better Pets Than Cats

Have you ever wondered if dogs make better pets than cats? Well dogs are energetic, snuggly and are always fantastic friends to have making them better than cats.

Firstly they run around and are energetic, you can play with them outside they also give you exercise because they need walks to keep them fit. Dogs are like a cute, loving treadmill all in one.


Secondly dogs are super snuggly and are one of the most affectionate pets to have. They love to look after you when you are sick, sad, and even sometimes mad. There are lots of different types of dogs for the sick, blind, deaf and many more.


Lastly They are fantastic friends to everyone. Dogs love humans 

Well humans that aren't breaking into there house or attacking there human. They even love babies and are gentle with them making lots of parents love them.


In conclusion there is no question that dogs make better pets than cats this is because they are energetic, snuggly and are fantastic friends


Success Criteria:

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I have used my first technique to enhance my writing

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I have used my second technique to enhance my writing

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I have used my third technique to enhance my writing

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Use at least three different (FEARRR) persuasive techniques in your writing.



Active Reflection: 

My Reflection



What have I done well?



I have used a lot of emotive language.





Next step:



I have to use more repetition.